2100 Years of Human Error

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By GeneriqueMedia

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Background

The writings of Neal Stephenson and William Gibson have entertained me greatly. I highly recommend "Neuromancer" and "Snow Crash" to anyone who hasn't read them.

These two books, set into an all too prophetic "near future," a place that just exists around the corner, showcase great talent. These two books themselves single handedly called us on most of the technology and culture we have today, even (like in Neuromancer's case) if it was written years before anyone really could understand the big picture.

Today I want to share with you a poem I've written (and I'm slowly making it into a beatnik industrial track) that collects humanity, our technology, our history, and our religion into one epic poem.

If you're familiar with more of my Hubs you might recognize some similar wording.

I hope you enjoy it. I got the idea a bit from a group of artists that have shaped my life too--the band Fear Factory and the song "Resurrection." I'll post a video below.

This Just In...

(Poem Preface)

Reaching the Expanse

A line connected it's self in my head, careening through neon junctions until a matrix of perverse thought was glittering before my eyes. And I saw the vastness of consciousness pool before me at my feet. The static, a hum of 6,525,170,264 different pathways etched into a spinning twine ball moving through an insignificant spec on a spiral galaxy. Collectively they thought something of more than trivial pursuit was going to present its self before them, as if they were a higher class of biological function that was able to shape and change its form.

A joke.


And as my future dictated a compulsory compliance, even a down right reliance to this whimsical idea, I couldn't quite convince myself. Somewhere on the edge of the solution to the problem, on the tip of my tongue, poking at my inner monologue with a cattle prod my sanity corroded.

Recorded history unfolds in my head, shooting through my spine like a 45 caliber bullet hurling it's self through the air at some unknown victim. The inevitable question never relenting, shouting through my atoms and grating my very existence causing my skin to crawl and my soul to feel ever more coarse ....

(Antikythera Mechanism)

Created about 2100 years ago--this is a complex calculator made by the greeks between 100 and 150 BC.
Created about 2100 years ago--this is a complex calculator made by the greeks between 100 and 150 BC.

Resurrection (Official Video)

2100 Years of Human Error

Victimized by viral play,
Folding it's self into our DNA.
Cascade.
Consuming and ingesting,
Catalysis of reflection.
Harnessing fire and designing
defense to soon become deadly intent.
Cascade...to the final fade.


When Eternity summons,
And questions our innocence,
What will we have to say?



Pock marking congregation,
Blast off into State.
Pock marking congregation,
Blast off into nations.

Harnessing fire, animals, our mother.
Learning to do the same with each other.
Writing lies on scrolls,
Claiming they've been foretold.
By an imaginary deity.

Divided by the common dominator,
Revering the mad instigator.
Oppressed by the scrolls
Until boredom unrolls.

When Eternity summons,
And questions our innocence,
What will we have to say?



Sailing oceans through,
Beating and bruising savagery.
Then conquering,
For gold, god, and glory.

Cycle reborn yet again:
Pock marking congregation,
Blast off into
Western Civilization.

Shoot a man needlessly,
Cause the world to bleed.
Bombs, bullets, idolatry;
Come get your mechanized army.

Faith in superiority.
Question, section, then subdue.
Exterminate that which you hate,
And watch it all renew.
Question the section off subdued,
Fight a useless war 'til peace comes unglued.

When Eternity summons,
And questions our innocence,
What will we have to say?

Smoke clears in the wake of physics gone wrong.
Whats the price of men for a bomb?
Race to arms and bare your faults,
Comucratical cults.

Skirmishes for superiority.
No one winning,
As we build up our cultural walls, another one will fall.

Popular conceit,
Fostered by transistor.
Scale down, watching production ramp up.
Black screens with white lines,
Turning into visual carmel with time.

Explore, rejoice, meld.
Explore, rejoice, meld;
Symbiont of society becoming.

Sell your music, distribute films.
Pushing while consumer is pulling.
Our rights taxed, position grueling.

When Eternity summons,
And questions our innocence,
What will we have to say?



Into the why of 2000,
Conspiracies and apathy abounding.
Millions of motionless cries resounding.

Dividing line of present and past.
Fear turned to silence,
Better living through science.

Man-Commune-Machine.
Impregnated with chrome gleam.
Danger not detected,
Technology right protected.

Last bastion of freedom
Becomes Man's enslavement.
In the wake of oppression renews,
As the scroll updates under false review.

Sinners or saints?
Still stuck in rut.
Innocence sacrificed,
Unjustly sent to die.

Victimized by greed's play,
Folding it's self into our DNA.
Cascade.

Consuming and abusing,
Catalyst of playback presentation.
Harnessing ideas and design;
Cascade, fade, black out with a whine.

Resurrection (Live)

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goldentoad 3 years ago

It would seem you are tuned in to the pulse of the machine

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GeneriqueMedia Hub Author 3 years ago

Thanks for the comment! Yeah, I readily admit...as an artist or philosopher or whatever, I tend to bury all of my creative energies into an idea when I go about doing it. I make no bones about it.

G|M

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shamelabboush Level 1 Commenter 3 years ago

Man! this is really something:

Last bastion of freedomBecomes Man's enslavement.

I can hear the clattering of the words. This is something.

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GeneriqueMedia Hub Author 3 years ago

*bows* Thank you. Question: Is a gun good or bad? Answer: its the person behind the trigger.

;)

I'm glad I've entertained you, I look forward to doing so more in the future. Be looking through your Hubs soon.

Sincerely,

G|M

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RKHenry 3 years ago

You are wonderfully gifted! I am such a huge fan of yours! HUGE FAN! Bravo. Thanks for the shout out too! But seriously, I meant every word I just wrote. You're truly gifted in so many ways.

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GeneriqueMedia Hub Author 3 years ago

I appreciate it RK. =) I'm an info junkie. I aspire to spit out info artistically, journalistically, and any other listically. I've been writing since I was young. So I look like I know what I'm doing now, apparently, but it wasn't always this way. Practice, practice, practice. ;)

G|M

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sharrie69 3 years ago

I love the beat to this...and the imagery..stuff exploding all over the place..pop whizz bang definately caught the spirit of the times. Good stuff

ColdWarBaby 3 years ago

This is very good. I especially like the refrain. Seems like it could be put to music. Perhaps that was the plan?

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GeneriqueMedia Hub Author 3 years ago

Thanks guys. =)

Yeah, I'm working on it...slowly but surely...just havn't been in the mood to record lately.

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k@ri 2 years ago

GM, I love the recurring question, "What will you have to say". Maybe I love it because I know what I will say...this is a very volatile question for many, I would think.

I love your preface and how it starts! "...a line connected..." I feel that also. The poem is wonderful! I cannot wait to hear it set to music! You are soooo wonderfully creative! Thank you for being here and sharing with us! When you are famous, I will say...Yea, I knew him on a writing site! :D

"Divided by the common denominator"...I so love this poem! You speak a great truth and are very perceptive. I listened to the music and it fits!!! Please send me the finished product! You are a creator! :D

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GeneriqueMedia Hub Author 2 years ago

Thank you Kari--you got it. =)

All my work is copyleft, and I make it freely available.

I'll be sure to send you a signed copy, though. ;)

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epigramman 2 years ago

Me don't know what you're talking about man BUT I love it anyway - it's so daring and unique that you might as well be speaking your own language which you are!

As for me I'm a little bit slow you know - I just landed from Mars in human form and I am just starting to figure this whole damn planet out!

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GeneriqueMedia Hub Author 2 years ago

Well my alien friend, good luck on your travels. Let me know if you find any secrets--I'm a little bit confused by people sometimes myself.

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Mentalist acer Level 6 Commenter 22 months ago

GLM...This is your profound Manifest. I'm Glad I found This:)!!

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GeneriqueMedia Hub Author 22 months ago

Thanks acer!

I'm glad you enjoyed! :)

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Pearldiver 18 months ago

Well GM... Got it in one mate! Excellent and you just had to have written this to a cool back beat! Write more poetry... develop this awesome freestyle that you have! Who else has the ability to paint a time capsule with such talented colors? You are Read in NZ mate!! Not everyone knows where we are.. but we appreciate uniqueness and (fishing! lol) Take Care.

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GeneriqueMedia Hub Author 17 months ago

Hey Pearldiver! Sorry it took me so long to respond :( I've been right busy--and there's a new vid for you as a reward for patience.

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Mentalist acer Level 6 Commenter 17 months ago

Motionless cries leading to bedridden politics and industry's fall into,by myself,lxxy,and the like of those who commented on this warning,an unsuprising fall,leaving only unremarkable rhetoric as a marker;)

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AskAshlie3433 16 months ago

This is very interesting! Cool hub. Makes you think. Best wishes and thanks!

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    Media that Influenced this Poem

    Snow Crash (Bantam Spectra Book)
    I began this book in my only Saturday school during my High School years. I was always going "Huh," "Oh, wow!" and laughing during the two hour session of reading. I almost got kicked out and faced re-doing the detention because I couldn't stop reacting to this writing.
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    Neuromancer
    This book opens up with the lines "The sky above the sea port was the color of television, tuned to a dead channel." William Gibson's writing is sharp and poetic, flowery and utilitarian at the same time.
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    Obsolete
    This is the album where "Resurrection" is on by Fear Factory. This album, much like others in their discog, is a concept album. It tells the tale of man and machine, of finding our humanity amidst digital chaos. Its a "metal" album, but I think if you can see past that and look at the lyrics you will truly come to appreciate this album.
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    Transgression
    This is my favourite Fear Factory album. Why? Because it displays all of their skills. Some songs are hard, some are slow with a beautiful melody. This band really is cutting edge, and despite being labeled "alternative metal," they stretch the genre to the very limits.
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